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Whole by YohannL

Yohann Lestat
14.01.2005 20:57

I've wanted to say this
three years before.
But I had to leave
to far away shores.

I wish I could stop
all of your pain
and now that i'm back
nothings the same.

sometimes we laugh
others we cry
but know just one thing
I'll love you till I die

Ever since that day
we met in that place
I live on cloud nine,
I float through space

I ask your forgiveness
dont leave me cold
'cause in your arms
I'm again whole.

Lee
18.01.2005 02:24

Yohann, thank you for shaing this very personal poem. I enjoyed it quite much! Great use of rythym.

Yohann Lestat
18.01.2005 12:35

Thanks Lee. we do what we can.

Mandi
18.01.2005 15:54

Wow... I completely agree... Very Beautiful, Love... Couldn't have said it better myself...

Yohann Lestat
25.01.2005 22:15

Thanks Mandi. I'm glad You guys understand.

Tahra
30.01.2005 16:12

That was amazing... Really touched me! Thanks for sharing that.

YohannL
31.01.2005 12:25

Thanks for your imput always good to have a fan.Thx Tahra

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