Freedom3 :: ART and POETRY

FREEDOM3 PROJECTS
sunday sonnet . exquisite corpse poetry MAIN
post poetry . guestbook . contact . home . 1ge.net
. poetry of l.m. hutchings .

POSTING RULES
· You may post your own poems and/or some personal favorites by others (properly credited of course).
· When commenting on poems please be polite and use constructive critism.
· If your poem is explicit in any way please put a warning in the title. This is harsh language, sexual descriptions, etc.

"doubts i may have"

Alastar
22.02.2005 12:38

Ive been doing this for so long
I looked and watched for so long
I got her back i should be happy
so why does it feel so wrong?

She loves yes all the day through
But I cant help ask what did i do
I said i would.I promise I will
But im never there my fate is sealed
Ill love him forever and you all the same
but are you sure i should give you my name?

I never am there
but the uncle is
Im sorry to say
thats just how it is

please understand Ill love you forever
but happened beforew and i dont want it again
she said we would be fine
than we broke apart
I,ve never been the same
I lost part of my heart.

I hope it never happens
that we,ll be together for ever
if the gods say it so
lets pray I,m that clever.

{my undieing love for you may we never part}

Alastar
01.03.2005 12:45

no more doubts

Add a Reply

Name