FREEDOM3 PROJECTS sunday sonnet . exquisite corpse poetry MAIN post poetry . guestbook . contact . home . 1ge.net . poetry of l.m. hutchings . POSTING RULES · You may post your own poems and/or some personal favorites by others (properly credited of course). · When commenting on poems please be polite and use constructive critism. · If your poem is explicit in any way please put a warning in the title. This is harsh language, sexual descriptions, etc. REACH ME by pOllO pOllO 27.01.2005 22:12 I want to believe lock myself in leafy layers stick out a hand reach me but all i feel are pesticides withering my fingers withering my soul crawl back in but it twists and turns and reaches for you ivy-like affection i can't stop it from growing but theres always that doubt that one cloud that could cover the sun what's going to happen to make it fade to black? Lee 01.02.2005 01:24 Pollo, this has some really great imagery in it. The only thing I would change about it would be to add puctuation so that the reader can see how it is meant to be read. Forgive me if you weren't looking for a technichal critique. I enjoyed the poem. Add a Reply Name Reply The owner of this site accepts no responsibility for copyright infringement. © 2004 LM Hutchings | forum script